I don’t now if – Cary Briel

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I don’t know if
your tooth-clenched pen
exacerbates your click, click
indifference,
but I will have words with
the silly women.
The blank stares
at sports scores and uh-huhs
belong no more
to the lore of woman,
nor to the apathy of man.

  

Written by Cary Briel

February 21st, 2010 at 1:27 pm

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  1. oh i love this one! especially teeth-clenched. you remind me of a line i wrote back in like 7th grade during a creative writing exercise that stuck with me for years but i’e never found the right poem for it “teeth marks that think” it was a poem about chewing on my pencil :)

    Jessie Carty

    26 Feb 10 at 9:59 am

  2. I love that! I’m sure there is a perfect poem waiting for that perfect line! :)

    Cary Briel

    2 Mar 10 at 7:54 am

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